revising chapters 1 3 on social media

I need to revise the chapters 1 – 3 on Social Media. My professor has given grading. I need to make the changes on her recommendations.

Here is the professor recommendations.

Monica,

I have attached the paper to this gradebook. If you could revise the opening and go through the remaining document for wording. You want to use the active voice and ensure that grammar, sentence structure, and clarity is present.